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"...You're dying."

You were surprised when he did nothing more than sit down beside you, crossing one of his legs over the other and sitting down in a position that was quite similar to that of 'the thinker'. Only now do you decide to study the gentleman further.

He was lean, but not in a scrawny way. A face that displayed an expression you could call 'sensible', but you also got the odd vibe off of him that he was a largely animated individual (they did say that a lot of a person's emotion was displayed by the way they drew their eyebrows. This man certainly had... Eyebrows. They, however resembled caterpillars more than 'eyebrows'). You had already concluded that his face was ageless, however, only now do you make it a personal challenge to try and identify his age by looking at his distinctive  features. Nevertheless, it soon became apparent that they reveal little to nothing.

He was frowning, his lips ghosting a pout, but not quite. He didn't seem immature enough for that. He suddenly glanced at you, and you felt rude for staring and observing him, so you looked away. However, it seemed that he had decided it was his turn to study you instead. You felt that emerald gaze over your face, and suddenly feel heat rush to your cheeks. What the hell? Why was this stranger looking at you? What did he care?

You look back at him as you feel a sudden pressure on the top of your shoulder and discover him giving a small pat. "Hey. Are you meeting any friends, or family on your shopping trip?"

You shake your head. "I'm alone."

"You want to spend your last day like that? All by yourself?" He seems genuinely concerned. "Are you sure?"

"There's no one worth to tell about this. I'll just be another dead body before the end of tomorrow. What is the use?"

He looks down. "You told me."

"You're just some stranger whom I decided to humor. Don't take it to a personal level that I told you anything. I guess I just needed to let somebody know before I'm a goner. I'm sorry."

"Don't be."

"But it's selfish." You roll your eyes, crossing your arms. "You had nothing to be concerned about."

He gave a small, almost sad smile. You're not sure why, or how, but perhaps by his solemn, understanding expression, or by the odd aging maturity in his eyes, you were sure that he had some sort of experience of someone dying before him. As if he had seen someone in the same position as you before. "Sometimes, my dear, you cannot control yourself and your greed, and you simply have to... Indulge." He suddenly touches your forehead with a few fingers and sighs. "Less than a day, eh?"

"Indeed."

"Hm..." He studies you once more, but stops and looks to the side as suddenly, the train comes into view. "Oh, perfect timing."

You're puzzled. "What?"

"Come on, dear. We're going to indulge." He says, taking your hand and lifting you up as the train doors open.

"Huh? What?" What was he doing? Why was he suddenly so friendly?

"Let me show you the city I call home." He winks. "I don't think you actually do want to be alone, do you? Not on a day like this. Let's... Make the most of it."
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CHAPTER ONE: [link]
Chapter three: [link]
Where the hell am I going with this, you may ask? I've decided to do one which actually has moral conflict in it, as you will hopefully soon see, England will have some tough decisions to make regarding the values he has with humans.

Stay tuned!
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AMAZING.I cant wait for more you. Are an brilliant writer
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~anniekirkland Dec 4, 2012  Student Artist
keep going, you will do a chapter 3, da? :iconscaryrussiaplz:
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~SourPussyCats Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
of on to the train : DDDD
jst to make this clear, but, when i read readerxcharacter's, I see it as a first person pov. wanted to let you know, because some of my comments are weird sounding for reader x characters :D keep going!!! ^w^
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Mood: Yearning ~ArcticDragonWolf97 Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is really, and I mean really good. I'd love to read more Scot, please update soon :D
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=sockseevil Dec 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awh, thanks! <3 Sure thing, man! I'll try and update soon, I'm just a bit behind because I'm under heavy duty revision Dxxxx
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~The-Puzzle-Ninja Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, MORAL CONFLICT!
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...You're going to screw with my emotions again, aren't you?
XD Ah well, I knew it was coming. After all, you're the one who caused me to burst into tears while reading Depending on the Material Blue. It was just so good, though.

I have confidence that this fic will be just as well written. It has a phenomenal start so far, and of course, written by the very talented you.
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=sockseevil Dec 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
HAHAHAHA HOW DID YOU GUESS? EMOTIONS ARE MY PLAYTHINGS. I TEND TO BREAK 'EM.
Really?! You burst into tears? OMFG I'M SO SORRY. I should have a warning, or something Dx
Huzzah! I have external confidence! D8 I will not let you down! And thanks so much <3
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~The-Puzzle-Ninja Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU SHOULDN'T BREAK EMOTIONS! THAT MIGHT TICK THEM OFF AND TRY TO BREAK YOU!
lolwhut?

Ah, don't be! I was just so...conflicted. I didn't know if reader-tan should love Ollie or Arthur. And then Ollie accidentally killed her. But he really wanted her back, proving that he did love her, at least a litle. SO. MUCH. CONFLICTION
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=autumn--thunder Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh my gosh. This is literally one of the most well written things I've read in weeks. I love you. ;w; It's got depth and emotion and it's almost painfully realistic. I just adore it and I can't wait to see where it goes.
It made my day.
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=sockseevil Dec 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh wow! Really? I'm honoured ;w; I love you too, random citizen, and I'm very glad you like it so far! :D
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